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THE TIME I WENT TO DISNEY WORLD IN FLORIDA BY: JADE BAKER =Chapter 1: The big surprise= One time I had the chance to go to Disney World in Florida and my mom and dad surprised Trista, Ava, and I about 3 weeks before we actually went.And Let me tell you what a big surprise that was. Before they had told us they had said a little something like this.....

"Jade, Trista, Ava come in the living room." We all rushed as fast as we could. Me and Trista both said, "What?" My mom and dad were each holding bags stuffed full of things but hidden behind their backs. " Guys we want you to know how much we love you and so were going to take you to disney world in florida". After me and Trista heard Them say that we were so happy that we were screaming while holding hands, __chanting__, and jumping up and down. At the same time me and trista went up to my mom and dad and __huged__ and kissed them both. So, after a couple weeks had passed by, it was the night before we were going to disney world and we didn't even have any of our stuff packed! Plus we were going to stay their from __saterday__ to friday so we had to get __cracken.__ Then when the next day arrived, we had to wake up at like 5:30 in the morning! I hate waking up that early but I was just so excited to get their that when my mom came in to wake me and Trista up, we were both talking to each other and __staring__ at the __ceiling__. My mom was suprised we were awake. We had to get our clothes on and shoes and everything else just as the usual. But one of the bad things is that we didn't get to eat breakfast until we got to the airport which was about a half an hour away from my house and we were starving. Plus, when we got to the airport, we had to wait in a bunch of big long lines and when we got the __chance__ to eat all we could eat at the buffet was a bannana, a donut, and some pop. I was still starving but later on when we got in the plane we had snacks to eat so it was okay. After we were done eating, we had to go in this line where you have to put your bags, purses, suitcases, and any type of __lugguge__ that you had on this thingy and it would take an x-ray of it to make sure there's no guns, or things that could hurt people or effect the airplane.

=Chapter 2: The airplane ride= So, after a while of waiting we finally had gotten onto the airplane. It took us about 3 and half hours to get to florida and it was me and both of my other sisters 1st time on an big airplane and it was awesome! Some of the best things about it were seeing the top of the clouds which was super cool, having snacks and __beverreges__, getting to play our electronics and games, and watch TV. Me and trista had both brought our DSIXL's and some of our other electronics. We had also brought some very small board games such as perfection and trouble.