Alayna+1st+persuasive+writing

=convincing the PTO=

===Hey PTO can you do a little thing for me? my school thinks we deserve a bounce house at the because it will be fun for also our school has had a good school year so far. Everybody has done great. If you do my whole school will let you play in it if you want to. Well we really,really,really,really want it sooooooooo much. We would have so much fun. we would really have fun it is easy. You just blow it up.......like a ballon. You can play in it too. Really it would be fun for me and my class. My teacher thinks it is a good idea. Mabye the whole school could do it. It would be a good cuase. Can you please,please,please just please let my class have it the whole school mabye too. It would be so nice of you. I know you guys can do it cause you guy rock. I would tell the princeble if the whole school can do it. They would like you guys soooooooooooooooooooooooo much. It is just for a day. Can't a school have a fun day. It could even be called PTO fun day if you want.===

===Kids here at Gunn would it because it would be fun. Some kids really would want this beacause some of these kid might of never have played on one. Also kids just want some fun. Can you give us sweet kids some fun? Us kids really want it now because we would have a awsome day and you would do it. Just like a nice person would do.===

===This bounce house wouldn't just be for our school for no reason....... it would be here for the carnival. So everyboby could do it even family members of the kids here at Gunn can do it. our carnival is lots of fun. So it would be funner if we had a bouce hous===