James'+Persuasive+Piece_12

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There should be more drills
=The fire alarm rings. You don't know what to do and you see a fire coming toward you and you are all alone in the classroom. You open the door and you don't see your classmates.=
 * Students would be more aware
 * Students would know what to do
 * We could avoid tragedies each and every year

=I think there should be more drills because what if you don't know what to do during a drill?=

=Imagine being in a disaster and you don't know what to do. You open the door and you don't see your classmates.=

**Imagine being in a fire and you didn't know what to do. That is why schools have fire drills. Students would be more aware if schools had more drills.**

=Students would know what to do during a fire, tornado, earthquakes, or lockdowns if schools had more drills. If schools didn't have drills, how would we avoid tragedies each and every year? Which brings us to the next topic.=

=With more drills going on at schools, we could avoid more tragedies each and every year. Without drills, why would there be schools?=

=In conclusion, more drills would help our community to be a safer place. Imagine a school using drills more frequently. Imagine schools using drills to be more safe and to avoid more and more tragedies each and every year.=