Erin's+work

......POWER...... BY ERIN STOKES

POWER, how do we control it? By having the human mind explore it's wonders. You see, power was not ment for all people, like the bad guys in a movie, they just want to rule. But some people have better things in mind for there youse of power. They would perfur to care for others and youse money wisely, like insed of bying all the candy and treats they would by a small amount of candy and get to the important things, like frute and yogot and meat and apples. other than food, people by other important stuff too. (That is not food.)

PEOPLE like to spend time waching t.v, well people in the white house ar'nt so luky, so they have to file paper work and stuff like that, but also control some power. Each branch has there oun set of power, like the goverment and white house and others like the court house.... you get the pic. so, the goverment is like, agents and wars and things like that. it would take a meraclul to live a war. Meenwhile, at the white house people are doing other stuff like what i said erlyer, fileing paper work, but that is not all, a elecshon might be going on, desiding who shoud be the prsadent. cool huh? not relly throw. fighting ofer one person to the next. wow. well, there is the cort house too, the cort house is where the juge go's to juge peoples story about the problum. non liagle, problum in fack.(jeese people, really?)

WHAT not to do with power you might ask, well, hitler killed people becuse he has enough power to, (and becuse he was rasoss.) so his oun wife killed him becuse she could not stand the fack he was kelling people, (she had enough power to do that as well as hitler.) but what about the good stuff about power? well, the prsadent portects the sidasins! (get it, the super hero portects the sidasins! haha.) anyway, familys love and care for the family members. that is a kind of power too. like mom saids "go to your room!" do you lisen? yes. or else mom drags you there. so family is a kind of power too.(niceist kind of power)

DO you think it is fun, having power? well it is not, if you use it coretly, power is hard work to have, like whaching over a clan in my favrot book saga, warriors. you have to help complants and wach over everyone like their your kid, it is hard work having power, like being the leader of your clan, (warriors) so anyway, power isn't your little game, it's serieos.power is just the thing that gets out of hand quick.

IS it fun siting on the couch all day? well, people with power do not. they think it is lazy, so pick up your pillow and play outside! please, but after your done reading, ok? well, try doing good stuff like playing and runing and eating good! stay helthy and some day you might be presadent.

............................................................................................................ REMEMBER, WITH GRATE POWER COMES GRATE RESPONSAIBILITY .............................................................................................................

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Draft Righting Ideas For My Small Idea Paper (D.r.i.f.m.s.i.p) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

< Sandy coming home > < Me meeting qwigles for the first time > < My first asthma attack > < My dad > < My fox dreams > < meeting Sandy at the pound >

Thinking one: It was a fine winter day when my mom said, "Erin, where getting a dog." yay i yelled, i huged her tight. "This is the fine day we have bin waiting for!" Oh i did not see you grand-dad, and yes it is. where is she? i acked. The puppys not hear yet. i have to by her, my mother sighed, and a lot of people want her. "i must go if im buying that dog, Erin, stay hear with grand-dad and be safe, do ..... i did that one, "do nothing of harm i got it now buy the puppy please!" alright alright bye. "bye!" i was bored for a while... then i whatched some T.V, then i played my DS and was bored again. then at noon my wet and cold mother arived, with sandy! "You got the puppy!! yay! yay!" yes, i got the dog. my mom was saying this is in a tired voice. "Mom are you alright, you seem, never mind. can i pet her? the puppy?" her name is Sandy. and yes you can. you may pet the puppy. "Mom, im norvos, can you help me pet her?" of corce, of corce.

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test S1: It was an amasing winter day, the day i got my amasing dog Sandy, i was only fore years in age. but i loved her from the moment i saw her in the pound. i knew, and i still know, now, at age ten, she is my tipe of dog. Anyway, on the first day I saw her, my mother had said we where going to the pound. "Now Erin, this dose not mean we are getting a pet today, alright?" "yes mama." I replyed. Then at the pound, we saw her, Sandy puppy! I took my mother by the hand and showed her the cutest thing you have ever seen. "look, look mom, i want her." "aww, my mom replyed issent she adorabul?!" "Yes mama." Then my brother came up to see the comeoshen. "look at the puppy jon! see?" "yes, i see." He replyed. " I want her mom. oh please please!" (then we both do puss in boots, my borther tot me how.)" alright, i mean, maybe." ( my mom has never gave into puss in boots, but where trying.) So then after an hower of puss in boots my mom agreed to buy Sandy. only if we would stop puss in booting! but that promess wore off.... anyway, we leared many people wanted sandy, so my mom would have to compet in a small comatishen. So the next day my mom got up really early and whent out to the pound where sandy was, the problum was it was wenter, and they whernt open.... for three howers. So my mom was stuck in the cold, and wet, tell the pound people came, and said hi. So then when my mom finally reached home she had Sandy puppy!! ><><><>< Sandy's having a good time in her new home. Before you adopt, make sure your family is ready for a purfict pet, to do so, if your thinking about getting a dog, do you have a water dish, a cenal if you deside to get a pup, a dog house if you want, ( otherwise they can sleep on the couch. )=====

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Test S2: One fine winter moring, me and my mom set out to find the perfit dog, well, we aledy have a dog, its just that he ( qwigles ) needs another dog arround. Qwigles has ben sighing a dog sigh, and thing like that. but no longer, for the cute, the adorabule, the sweet, the fluffy, the Sandy is coming home!! so at the pound, my mom was looking at a dog who was barking like mad, while i just descoverd Sandy. So i pulled my mom over and showed her, Sandy, my mom looked once and fell in love with the soft puffball puppy. i did too in fack. but my mom sighed, and said glumly, "Erin, Sandy will be hard to buy, but i will try, so you have to behave at home, alright?" i answerd okay. and evrything went fine. the dog came home, all where happy. ( well in my house, wich never happends ) }{}{}{}{}{}{ When Qwigles first meat Sandy they where pritty happy as friends, but as the years went by Qwigles and Sandy became best friends, then close best BFF's, cool huh, but, Qwigles got old, and died, so then Sandy was alone, but we bot Dozer! the ressling playmate wich will be never as good as Qwigles, but he's still good somhow that we will learn in the fucher. At least he's becoming part of the family, a good dog, That Sandy desurves.=====

winner, < meeting Sandy at the pound > !! ............................................................................................................................................................