William's+First+Persuasive+Writing

The Principal

Dear Principal,

Some people think Recess is at low priority but its really not. Most people like some parents claims "that less Recess is a bad thing because there is less time for learning." But in the text below you might be suprised of what Recess does for a child.

It also improves a better student. The reason is it will help a childs writing believe it or not, giving them ideas for peices to publish for a personal naritive. Also its been proven that Recess improves better grades and classroom behavier at Albert Einstein College of Medicene of Yeshiva University. Teachers too can also take the time to get ready for the next lesson to ( that makes it more organized ) more organization is vital for more time for lessons.

I and many others will say we need Recess for a time to hang out with friends and its something to look forword to like P.E.. Kids also need Recess to exercise for there **health**.So it will be better to have ten minutes to our Recess to improve skills for students they will need in every day life and both some students and teachers say Recess is a good thing.

Recess is one of the main scores of **exercise** in school. Recess

Thanks to the Greatest Principal in the World,


 * //Willam Adam Jones//**

Leads
 * 1) Adding ten more min. of Recess it will help a childs health! Proven in the text below.
 * 2) Most people think more Recess is a good thing for people to have better health because some teachers and students will agree that more Recess is a good thing as it was proven below this text.
 * 3) I think the best Principal in the world should ad ten more min. of Recess because it does improve our health. Like most people will agree that more Recess is a good thing.
 * 4) Most people think Recess is at low priority but its really not.

KEY STAR IDEAS 1. Health 2. better student 3. kids time to take a break other than the weekend, summer vacation, days off, and after school