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Why Private Schools Should Be For Everyone By: Niko Valdiviezo

Civil War has been caused by Private Schools, The discriminated people have declared war, against Private schools for not letting them in, The money has all gone to the Private schools so everyone is poor, homeless, and the Private Schools are greedy and wealthy. Well I think they should let everyone go to private schools. I have a way to solve the problem of no equality from Private Schools. The reasons Private Schools should be for everyone are it discriminates kids who can’t go, It is easy to make the change and if you did the kids would be happier.

One reason, private schools should qualify for everyone is they discriminate students all they want to do is learn! Some people only want a good education but they are poor, the poor people would be upset because they don’t have enough money they probably think everyone is rich with the money they have this is discrimination. The boys only and girls only schools are mean to the other gender of student they are this is discrimination. Also, Some kids who have a disability might be disappointed because they thought it was a good school but not anymore this is discrimination. What if Kids get a disability in school would they be kicked out that is unfair and makes them feel excluded from all of their friends?

Private schools could change their ways easily I mean you already have tons of money from all your kids how do you think they feel you can make the change or are you too greedy and want all the money for yourself. Another reason is, the school can be changed easily, Nobody will care unless you treat them unfairly. Because of, having more kids come the school may become more popular. All you need is to at most it should cost $200.

Kids would be happier to know that there is equal rights and everyone can go to every school, Private schools could start a civil war if people think more deeply about it, so kids do not have equal rights? That is mean to students people will think private school owners have no heart and do not care about Children. If you made the change kids would have their self-esteem boosted. Once an Elderly Grocery Cashier was talking to me and said that I’m smart and exclaimed specifically “We need kids like you we have dumb people in the world.” I think I Private schools could fix that if more kids came but you would have to change the cost and which people can come. The kids would like their teachers and teachers like the students so more elated people in the world.

In conclusion, Private Schools should be for everyone and lower the costs so more people come and students are not discriminated and elated I hope you have made your decision on private schools. Think about the new things that could happen if Private Schools were for everyone. The war has stopped, you don't know, the one the private schools started, Private Schools are now for everyone.