Emilee's+persuasive+writing 

  As a woman walks by you with a cigarette in her hand and walks by you with a trail of smoke behind her and the horrible scent lingers around you And you watch in disgust as she walks off .Have you ever smelled the scent of smoke? I have and i don’t think I smells good at all. I think we should make a law in the united states for No smoking So we don't have to smell that gross scent any more .It’s so bad for you can get cancer plus it cost a lot of money and its horrible for kids worse than to yourself.

 All the smoke will go into your lungs and make you really sick. Due to that there's a high risk for lung cancer of a lung disease like emphysema, tuberculosis, Bronchitis et. There More than 2.4 million deaths in the USA annually, over 440,000 are caused by smoking."The medical news today, Also It makes you age faster. do you want to die faster. Therefore you shouldn’t smoke because it’s really bad for your lungs. If you want cancer and a lung illness go ahead. It make people die faster because of all the illnesses i could make you die faster. Unless you want to die at a young age. We need stricter laws for smoking.I don’t know about you but i don’t like the smell of smoke.

 How much do you think a little pack of disgusting cigarettes are? They are $5.47 in Iowa in other states in the U.S are more expensive than you think. In the state of New York they are $7.45 that's a lot of money for something like that. I think we should not be able to smoke in any state. I also think that if there was smoking you shouldn't do it by kids, and they weren't as addictive!  If smoking is bad for you why smoke around kids because they can get ill as well, if you smoke around them. They will get cancer if you smoke around them or by them. Even if you don’t know the kid still don’t smoke around children. If you can get cancer so can kids. Additionally kids shouldn't have to go through that just because of you.

 Now it’s a beautiful summer day with the same woman walks by you now the air by her is smoke free it smells good. That’s why we need smoking should be illegal, because do you what to get cancer? I sure don’t. 