Kaden's+Jetski+Story--Word+Choice

My dad can tell you some good advice but when you go on a Jet Ski ride with him, things can go downhill. So here I am, 7 on the Jet Ski with my dad. What goes wrong nothing, well at least at first.

It was May 30th on our way to Fremont Lake. It was hot and humid. I can't wait until we get the Jet Ski in the water. So when we got it in my dad took me for the first run. It was a perfect day to go jet skiing. I was holding on tight to him so I didn't fall off. Then after we did a couple laps I asked to drive.

I climbed up front, and he got in the back. I was having a drive of my life it was like a dream. It was only like my second time on my Jet Ski and first time driving. I was getting my speed up and got a couple laps going a descent speed the whole time. We were on the straight away and he wanted me to go faster. So I went a little bit faster and then my eyes started watering because of the wind, and then I could barley see. Then were coming up to the turn and that's where it started.

A big ski boat comes right by us and you know when boats are going to fast and there not going to slow, their waves are huge! So my dad told me to hit the wave, but I didn't want to so he told me again and then I hit it...

The bad thing was we were turning while I'm hitting the wave. So, what usually happens ridding a jet ski and turning in the air? You flip right? Well, we did. Not a full flip, a half flip. So here I am now upside down, almost drowning with a jet ski on top of me, which is like a bolder on my back. I was coughing up water which I hate because it seems like your chocking. What also doesn’t help was I had water up my nose. So I was trying to stop coughing and get the water out of my nose which doesn't work to good. Then I was able to stop coughing water and not have anymore water up my nose. Then I'm wondering where my dad went. But I found him on the other side of the Jet Ski.

Finally, I was able to swim away next to the Jet Ski where my dad was. The Jet Ski was still upside down and I'm wondering how we are suppose to get it back up, and I also was glad that I was wearing my life-jacket. So, my dad gets the Jet Ski back up and he makes it look like he can touch the bottom the way he flips the Jet Ski back up. When I get on I'm freezing because the wind was blowing on the way back to are camp-sight.

So I think if you would be going on a Jet Ski ride with my dad and you’re driving, maybe you should go your own way.