Alexis's+1st+Persuasive+Writing

=Convincing Mrs.Preston=

==The smell of chocolate as you first walk into the store, you can smell all the magical ingredients that make the chocolate so wonderfully great then you see it the chocolate bucket where you can fill a bucket up with chocolate but then it hits you it was a dream. NO! NO! NO! It is not a dream ti is real. Mrs.Preston my class deserves to go to the HERSHEYS CHOCOLATE FACTORY!!!!! It is only in chicago it wouldnt cost that much money to go, actually it would,but forget about that think how much fun i will have and how much fun the class would have and think how much fun you will have. Sure again it will cost a lot of money but it still everyone will again have a exellent time and the whole class would be could when we were there snd on the way. The Hesheys factory is only in Chicago, Illinois, thats not too far away from here. If we went it would be a stupendous field trip and a one of the top field trips this Gunn school has ever had.Also it would be a good experience for the class. It would also be for a good cause, and that cause is THE MRS.PRESTONS CLASS FUNNEST FIELD TRIP EVER!!!!! And the funnest field trip ALEXIS has been to, by the way it would problay be o.k. if we went the school wouldnt care to much, but by the way jsut our class is going but if you would go with ms. reinigs class that be fine at leats we could go. nice peole do this kind of thing, nice teachers do even nicer things than this, an even nicer thing would togo to disney world but i want push it to far. So I guess we will stick with the Hersheys Chocolate Factory.==