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Do you sit on the couch and get lazy and your mom tells you to go outside and you say "There is nothing to do outside. you will not be fat and lazy because they need sports,at an earlier age because kids only get 30 minutes in P.E,with the people paying for fund raisers the school would have more money for the school and so kids get more exercise.

P.E is 30 minutes kids are to have 60 minutes of exercise.A after school sport would give the kid the 60 minutes of exercise that they need plus more minutes.Like if you wanted to go on the swimming they could have a one bus to take the kids to the Y.M.C.A or to Krin or somewhere like that.The kids need this.

If we did sports at an earlier it would help other stuff like lunches field trips and stuff like that.some schools desperately need it,also the money could be used for new stuff like computers.The pto wouldn't need to pay as much and they pay for a lot of stuff and it would help with leeks

also kids need more exercise they are to have one hour of exercise a day.After school sport would give them that hour over exercise a day benefit and it would give the parents some peace and quiet.The kids would be having fun.The parents would not have to worried about picking up there kid then drive to practice in short amount of time.

In conclusion we should really change something that would work better than sports for the city the parents would have it easier so would the kids.